The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparions where relevant.

The table illustrates the budget allocation for police in a particular state of Britain between 2017 and 2018

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the pie chart displays the distribution of money in the same period. Looking from an

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perspective, it is readily

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apparent

that the National

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government

, Local Taxes and other grants were the major

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of revenue.

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, considering the expenses, the salaries acquired the major potion. The second

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spent was buildings and transportation.

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with

police

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budget, in 2017, the total income was 304.7millins and it has

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slightly increase

slightly increased

up to 318.6

millions

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. The major revenue was the National Government and it has increased

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potion by 2.3

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2017 allocation. The collection of local taxes

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at the second position. It has clearly shown the amount of money has been raised by 1.1

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than the previous year.

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, other sources

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as grants

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not indicated a considerable growth in 2018. The salaries obtained nearly

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third of spending in both

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years.

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,

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were slight reduction

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place in 2018. The buildings and transportation expenses remain unchanged in the

consecative

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consecutive

years. The technological expenditure has grown

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by 6% in 2018.