The diagram below shows the stages involved in producing one bottle of wine.

The diagram below shows the stages involved in producing one bottle of wine.
The diagram below shows how a bottle of wine is produced.
Overall
, the process comprises three main stages: making
juice
out of
grapes
and fermentation, pressing and filtration, and
finally
, storage in barrels. The process commences with harvesting ripe
grapes
, and the primary ingredients are processed in an extracting machine; every 400
grapes
create 3,000
mL
of
juice
.
Then
, the
juice
is fermented for two weeks;
this
step transforms the sugary fruit content into alcohol. After two weeks of fermentation, a compressing apparatus awaits the crude alcohol, concentrating the solution into one-third of the original amount.
This
way, 1,000
mL
of liquid is produced from 3,000
mL
of
juice
.
Subsequently
, the dense fluid is sent to the filter, eliminating unwanted substances.
Finally
, the cleansed wine is stored in several wooden barrels. Roughly, through
this
whole process, a bottle of wine, with an amount of 750mL, is made out of 400 ripe
grapes
.
Then
, the bottles are sent to supermarkets to reach customers. Interstingly, the waste from the steps of
juice
extraction, compression, and filtration are all collected and recycled to compost.
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