The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
The provided line graph delineates the trend in tourist numbers visiting a specific Caribbean
island
from 2010 to 2017, with a distinction between visitors
staying on cruise
ships and those lodging on the island
.
Over the seven-year period, the total number of visitors
exhibited a consistent upward trajectory. In 2010, approximately 1 million
tourists
stayed on cruise
ships, whereas
those staying on the island
were slightly fewer, at around 0.5 million
. Interestingly, while
the number of tourists
on cruise
ships saw a steady increase, peaking at nearly 2 million
by 2017, the count of visitors
lodging on the island
remained relatively flat until 2014, after which it experienced a sharper rise, reaching roughly 1.5 million
by the end of the period.
The gap between the two categories of visitors
was somewhat narrow in the initial years; however
, from 2014 onwards, the growth rate of cruise
ship
tourists
accelerated, widening this
gap. By 2017, cruise
ship
visitors
outnumbered their counterparts by approximately 0.5 million
.
Notably, the most significant annual increase for island
stayers occurred between 2016 and 2017, suggesting a potential shift in visitor preferences or improvements in island
accommodation facilities. Conversely
, the growth in cruise
ship
tourists
was more gradual, indicating a steady popularity in
Change preposition
of
cruise
-based travel to the island
.
In summary, the graph reflects a robust increase in tourism to the Caribbean island
, with cruise
ship
visitors
forming the bulk of this
growth. The data underscore the island
's rising appeal as a tourist destination, particularly for cruise
vacations, while
also
hinting at a burgeoning interest in longer island
stays.Submitted by odongua on
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