In their advertising, business nowadays usually emphasizes that their products are new in some way. Why is this ? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
Recently most entrepreneurs
start
to campaign their products as a breakthrough in some Wrong verb form
have started
way
when carry
out Change the verb form
carrying
the
advertising. Correct article usage
apply
This
then
can be seen as a trial to market the product
based on the uniqueness it has than
other products. Personally, I agree that Change preposition
over
this
trend can brings
more positive development than the negative one.
First and foremost, some companies nowadays try to gain profit as much as they can gain by branding the products as 'an odd one' or unique. Some temptations Change the verb form
bring
then
made Add a missing verb
are then
such
as advertising the product
as the one and only in the city, or hire
an artist or influencer to up-brand the Wrong verb form
hiring
product
. Another approach can be in recruiting
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to recruit
the
staff with excellent marketing Correct article usage
apply
skill
. Usually, Fix the agreement mistake
skills
the
companies will seek those Correct article usage
apply
ones
who have good public speaking and can explain better to Correct pronoun usage
apply
customer
.
I think Fix the agreement mistake
customers
this
way
of advertising brings positive
impact not only Correct article usage
a positive
to
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on
company
but Add an article
the company
also
to
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on
the
society and the staff themselves. For Correct article usage
apply
society
concern, Change noun form
society's
this
way
means that in this
era there are a great number of creative people. The creativity that made
somehow brings new knowledge for some people, especially in terms of marketing language. Another positive development of Add a missing verb
is made
this
way
is bringing the staff to the
higher position in Correct article usage
a
company
, Add an article
the company
a company
as a result
of the creativity or breakthrough they bring. Many parties then
accept the advantages of this
creative advertising.
To sum up
, I believe that advertising a product
in new
Change the article
a new
way
is a brilliant idea. It is
not only bring benefit to companies but Verb problem
benefits
also
to
many parties.Change preposition
apply
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that the essay contains a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion. The introduction should present the topic and the writer's opinion clearly, and the conclusion should effectively summarize the main points and restate the opinion. Develop paragraphs with clear topic sentences and supporting sentences that expand on the main idea.
task achievement
Work on including more specific examples to support your arguments. The prompt asks you to explore the reasons behind businesses emphasizing newness and to provide a balanced discussion on whether this is a positive or negative development. Include relevant examples to make your argument stronger and more convincing.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite