The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
The two line charts illustrate the fluctuations of the proportions of three types of household appliances owned by families and the time those used in housework in a specific country from 1920 to 2019.
At the beginning, the percentage of vacuum
machine
and Fix the agreement mistake
machines
refridgerator
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refrigerators
depict
consistently Wrong verb form
depicted
increase
during a century. The amount of Wrong verb form
increased
the
households who owned Correct article usage
apply
refridgerator
and vacuum Correct your spelling
refrigerator
refrigerators
machine
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machines
start
at zero and 30% separately in 1920. Wrong verb form
started
However
, these proportions reached Linking Words
to
100% successively in 1980 and 2019. Change preposition
apply
Nevertheless
, the number of families who owned washing machines had seen a Linking Words
slightly
decrease in 1980, it shows a Change the adverb
slight
steadily
growth between 1920 and 2019 and up to 75%.
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steady
Overall
, because Linking Words
the
electrical facilities contribute Correct article usage
apply
convinience
to households in the country, people spend less and less time Correct your spelling
convenience
to do
housework. It Change the verb form
doing
dispays
the percentage of hours of housework decline from 50 hours per week to 10 hours a week.Correct your spelling
displays
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