The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K. and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the informahtion by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K. and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the informahtion by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph makes a comparison between the salaries of various jobs in the UK and the table gives information about the average working
hours
of 5 different professions.
Overall
, the highest income profession is the underground driver in both started and over a three-year period
while
it
also
requires the least amount of working
time
.
Also
, the salaries of all the jobs tend to rise slightly after 3
years
. It can be seen from the graph that underground driver has the top salary compared to other professions, approximately under £50,000 a bit and above £50,000 during the
last
3
years
.
In contrast
, the nurse is paid less than every job in comparison, about £15,000 at first and just under £20,000 over a period of 3
years
. In second place on the graph are firefighters, at £40,000 when started and increased to more than £40,000 3
years
later. The salary of police is above £20,000 at the start
time
and rose a bit over
time
,
however
, it didn’t change much. From the statistics, it can be inferred that teachers and firefighters both have long working
hours
, at 55
hours
per week, they
also
have the highest average amount of working
time
. Police are ranked second in the table, at 40
hours
, followed by the nurse at 38
hours
weekly. The underground driver earns the most income
whereas
it has the fewest working
hours
on a weekly basis, at 36
hours
.
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