You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: It is argued that mibile phones and other electronic devices have no place in the classroom. To what extent do you agree or diagree with this view? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knoledge of experience. Write at least 250 words.

These days, everybody

have

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a mobile

phone

,

uncluding

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including

children. It is common opinion that

a

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such

modern

technique

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techniques

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should be

forbiden

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forbidden

at schools.

This

essay agrees with the statement, that a

phone

must be restricted during lessons. First of all, all contemporary electronic

devices

are the reason

of

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low attention during

the

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apply

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classes. The second reason is the competition between children that might

be

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occure

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occur

cause

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because

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of

devices

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device

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level. In the classroom, it is very important to keep all attention on a study subject and a teacher. But modern social media and

accessiable

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accessible

information might be the reason

of

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for

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the decreasing focus.

For example

, for most

children

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children,

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it is easier to spend time watching short funny videos

either

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or

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to study for a long period of time. Even adults

loosing

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ability

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the ability

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to concentrate

while

using mobile phones. Bringing the

phone

into the classroom caused an

interraption

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interruption

on it, and the attention went down.

On the other hand

, if scholars

will

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not

using

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use

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any kind of techniques during the class, it

is

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still might

be

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have

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a negative effect.

For example

, not all

of

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apply

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young people or their parents

able

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are able

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to buy even

simple

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a simple

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mobile

phone

. Some of

pupils

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the pupils

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might have an

expesive

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expensive

explosive

device,

whereas

others might have only a

phone

.

As a result

, some groups of students often

treating

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others.

This

situation might be avoided by restricting of using

such

devices

at school. In

conclusing

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conclusion

concluding

, it is my firm

believe

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belief

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that the classroom is not a good place to use mobile phones. The main goal at the school is to learn from study materials and teachers. Unfortunately, for most learners electronic

devices

brings

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bring

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only distraction or reasons for

bulling

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bullying

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.