The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles
The provided diagram illustrates the
process
of transforming recycled plastic bottles into raw materials
. In total, there are nine distinct steps involved, ranging from waste separation to the production of final materials
, which can be recycled once again.
The initial step in the recycling process
is the segregation of waste, specifically placing plastic bottles into dedicated bins. Subsequently
, these bins are transported to a recycling centre, where workers further
sort the waste. The sorted materials
are then
compressed into blocks using a specific tool, which are subsequently
crushed by passing through motorized gears. Following
this
, the crushed material is collected in a water-filled storage unit for washing.
After cleaning, the crushed materials
are fed into a specialized machine to create plastic pellets. These pellets undergo a heating process
, transforming them into raw materials
. These raw materials
, derived from recycled bottles, serve as the foundation for producing final products such
as clothing, stationery, bags, or containers. Eventually, these products can be recycled again, potentially undergoing the same process
at the end
of their lifecycle.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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