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The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given line graph illustrates the information about
proportion
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the proportion
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 of
people
 aged 65 and over in 3 different
country
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countries
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Japan
,
Sweden
 and
USA
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the USA
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 in the period of 100 years between 1940 and 2040.
Overall
, it can be seen from
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the line
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line
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the line
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 graph
proportion
 of
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the population
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population
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the population
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 aged 65 and over in
Japan
,
Sweden
 and
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the USA
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USA
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the USA
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 has
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an increase
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an increase
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increased
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increase
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 trend. And in
the
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apply
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2040
Japan
 has the most
proportion
 of
people
 aged 65 and over and
USA
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the USA
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 has the least. in 1940
Japan
has
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had
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 the
least
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lowest
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proportion
 and
USA
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the USA
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has
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had
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 the most but in the period of 80 years between 1940 and 2020
Japan
 and
USA
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the USA
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tends
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tended
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 to increase but
increases
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increased
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 little and
Sweden
 increased sharply in the
proportion
 of
people
 aged 65 and over. In 2020
Sweden
 rose to the top in the
proportion
 of
people
 aged 65 and over
while
Japan
 was still the least. From 2020 to 2040 all 3
country
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countries
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 still
increase
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increased
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 but
Japan
 increased sharply in the
proportion
 of
people
 aged 65 and over and rose to the top
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Vocabulary: Replace the words proportion, people, japan, sweden, usa with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 7 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 6 times.
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