Some people think that competitive sports have a positive effect on the education of teenagers while others argue that the effect is negative. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Athletic competitions are perceived to be educative to adolescents by some but others debate

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are solely disadvantageous. On

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hand , teenagers are challenged to develop their skills only in these situations and

on the other hand

, they begin to grow seeds of jealousy and rivalry. I think it causes more misunderstandings among

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. It can help

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nurture their individual skills by playing in the midst of

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another because

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age, most of them learn better in the company of their mates. A pubertal boy or girl who loses a game will put in more effort to do better in their next challenge and

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follows an upward trend of growth and development in their education of the importance of outdoor activities.

For instance

, my nephew who is used to showing off his football skills, only started intensifying his training when he lost his first match. The declaration of

one

person as the winner and the other the loser in an organised game could begin to make colleagues see each other as rivals, who are solely after the downfall of each other. The problem is in these settings where people are considered competitors, teenagers are put under pressure so they begin to focus on showing off and outshining the other or

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winning and gaining recognition and not

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the level of training and experience they can gather from the second person.

For example

, my niece slowly started wishing for her friend to stop showing up in practice because when she was around,

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meant she

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not score more points in volleyball. I think there are more disagreements and it takes away from the importance of sports and makes us focus on unnecessary things that can foster disunity. There are many terms that ought to be met in every sporting activity and a competition draws attention to these trivial issues

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all because

one

person wants to succeed and not the other. An example is how often the winning

team

is considered a cheat and how the losing

team

is seen to be the victim of

such

unfairness. In conclusion,

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the improved

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performance

of any athletic teenager will depend on the number of competitions they have been a part of, it could

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breed hatred and contempt. I think there will be more quarrels in

such

situations.