The chart below shows the amount of money given to developing countries from five organisations from 2008 to 2011. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The bar chart below provides information concerning the amount of money given to developing countries from five Organisations from 2008 to 2011. The data can be divided into two parts, namely the number that experienced an upward trend and a downward trend. Figures are given in billion dollars
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the money received from Organisation 2 in 2011 is the highest whereas
the support from Organisation 4 in the same year is the lowest over the given period.
To begin
with the receiving rate from Organisations 1 and 2, the level started at 0.6 and 1.5 in 2008 then
moderately grew to 0.6 and 2.6 in 2011 which is higher than the starting point.
Moving onto the earning money from Organisations 4 and 5, the sponsorship rate in 2008 was 0.75 and 1.3 continually before steadily dropping to 0.35 and 0.45 in 2011.
The exception was the sponsorship from Organisation 3 because the rate started at 1.5 in 2008 before a slight increased
and decreased to around 1.75 and 1.4 respectively until remained at 1.5 in 2011.Replace the word
increase
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 92%.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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