The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002.

The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002.
A glance at the bar chart provided reveals the percentage of calls made by telephones in the UK over a period of eight years.
Overall
, almost all data underwent a progressive growing pattern, the reverse
a
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stark contrast was true for the local-fixed line. In terms of the local-fixed line, it started
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70
minutes
in 1995, it elevated dramatically and topped at 90 after half a decade.
Subsequently
, there was a steady
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witnessed in the telephones to the point
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the first year. It is clearly noted in the chart that there was a minimally uniform trend experienced in the others, except for the initial point and growing level.
While
National and international-fixed consistently increased from approximately 40
minutes
to over 60
minutes
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over a 8-year period, Mobiles relentlessly rose from merely 5
minutes
to over about 45
minutes
. It in 2002 was
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times as much as itself in the previous eight years.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • total number
  • minutes
  • telephone calls
  • UK
  • divided into
  • categories
  • from
  • to
  • overall
  • increased significantly
  • local fixed-line calls
  • accounted for
  • largest proportion
  • throughout
  • period
  • international calls
  • highest rate of growth
  • experiencing
  • sharp increase
  • national long-distance calls
  • remained relatively stable
  • slight decline
  • towards
  • end
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