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the picture illustrates instant noodles making process steps. describe it is with 150 word

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The given diagram demonstrates the production process of instant noodles.
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, the production process of instant noodles, includes 8 steps, starting with transporting from storage silos and
which
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ending with labelling. Looking at the process in a more detailed way, as soon as
floor
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 is delivered by a special truck. It is mixed in
container
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 with water oil. Following that rolling equipment flattens the dough and transforms it into
dough
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a dough
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 sheet. Having been flattened, the sheet of dough is cut into thin slices which
further
 are reshaped into noodle
disc
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. After instant noodles have been cooked with oil,
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the product
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product
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the product
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 is
then
 dried. As soon as they have put cups with vegetables or spices. After that product labels
for
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looks
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look
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 appetizing for people and sealing to know which company’s product
and
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as soon as
.
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possible.
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 It
is gone
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 to markets,
bazaar
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bazaars
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, sales points, and any commercial places
for
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to
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 sell to other people.
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