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Writing Samples
Band 5

write a letter to restaurant that you had dinner last night

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Dear sir , I am writing
this
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 letter to
do
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say
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 thanks for the wonderful service that I got
last
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 night
on
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at
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 my birthday party . I want to special thanks to
head
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the head
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cheaf
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chef
 for the delicious dinner .
The
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Last
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last
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 night , I
decide
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decided
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 to celebrate my special day
on
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at
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 your venue , "The
taj hotel
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Taj Hotel
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 ". I want to appreciate the
services
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 provided by you and your staff . I ordered starters and
main
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the main
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 meal as well . Your starter dish it's not only delicious in taste but
also
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it's
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its
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eye catching
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eye-catching
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 appearance
make
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makes
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 my day . Apart from that , in the main
meal
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meal,
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 the taste of sahi
paner
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paneer
panel
paper
 is
mouth watering
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mouth-watering
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.
Moreover
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 , I am not
onlyhappy
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only happy
 with your
services
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 but
also
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 the amount of food is satisfactory . My whole family enjoyed the dinner
just
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for just
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 under
only
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apply
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$150 .
Although
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 ,
last
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 night your restaurant was fully busy yet your
co- workers
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co-workers
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 provide us
a
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with a
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better service .
Moreover
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 , at the time of
cake
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the cake
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cutting
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cutting,
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 they
also
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 play
a special music
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special music
a piece of special music
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 for me . Actually, one of my
friend
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friends
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 recommended
me
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apply
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about
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apply
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your restaurant. Because
,
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he is your regular customer.
Then
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, he told me about your special dishes and
services
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 as well . So ,
then
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 I decided to celebrate my birthday here . In the
last
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 fully satisfied with your warm welcome and
services
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 . Hope we will meet again .
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Yours
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Your
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Yours
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 sincerely XYZ

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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph has a clear central theme and avoid mixing different ideas. Focus on having a single, clear purpose in each paragraph.
coherence cohesion
Use a variety of linking words and phrases to improve the flow and cohesion between sentences and paragraphs.
coherence cohesion
The letter's structure can be improved by adding more formal salutations and signing-off appropriately for a letter context.
task achievement
Make sure to address the task fully by providing relevant details such as the date of the visit, specific compliment or complaint as required by the task.
task achievement
Maintain a consistent and appropriate tone throughout the letter; your tone should reflect the formal or informal nature of the letter based on the context and recipient.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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