The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram provides information about how cold
water
can be used to produce electricity by getting help
of geothermal energy.
At Add an article
the help
the
first glance, it is clearly seen that Correct article usage
apply
This
process involves two phases from returning cold water
to hot water
by hot rocks settled in geothermal
zone Add an article
the geothermal
a geothermal
under ground
. Despite the first phase, the second phase happens on the ground which begins Correct your spelling
underground
by
hot Change preposition
with
water
turning to steam.
In the beginning, cold water
gets hot after being pumped down about 4.5 km deep through the injection well. After that, it becomes hot by geothermal
zone. Correct article usage
the geothermal
Finally
, hot water
gets pumped up through the production well to be settled in a condenser where the second phase starts.
By turning hot water
into the
steam the turbines can roll, and the power made by that helps the generator to produce energy. Correct article usage
apply
The next step is
to the
generator start working. Eventually, Add a missing verb
have the
that is
how we can produce electricity with almost no pollution.Submitted by hanarad41 on
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