The bar chart gives information about the comparison of visitors going to distinct museums in London from June to October.
The bar chart provides information about the
numbers
of Fix the agreement mistake
number
museum
visitors
in four thematic places in London between June to October.
In general, the british
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British
museum
is the most popular place for tourists while
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the national
national
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National Museum
museum
is place
with the lowest Correct article usage
the place
avarage
of Correct your spelling
average
visitors
.
According to
the data, the British Museum
reach
a peak of Wrong verb form
reached
visitors
at approximately 700.000 in August. Similarly
, History
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the History
Museum
also
reach
the highest Wrong verb form
reached
tourist
in August with 600.000 people Fix the agreement mistake
number of tourists
comes
. The lowest record of people visiting Wrong verb form
coming
History
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the History
Museum
happens in June and July with roughly 400.000 visitors
. Meanwhile, the statistics shows
the Change the verb form
show
visitors
of History Museum
dropped at
around 200.000 in October.
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to
In contrast
, the National Museum
always held the record for the lowest visitors
every month over the period, the average of Correct quantifier usage
number of visitors
the
people who visit Correct article usage
apply
National
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the National
Museum
is around 200.000-300.000 per month. Meanwhile, the number of science museum
shows a decline from June to August and reach its lowest point in October at 300.000 attendes
.Correct your spelling
attendees
attendee
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