The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart shows the proportion of major causes
on
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of
becoming
agricultural Verb problem
making
land
less productive. The table illustrates the information about how these causes affected three regions: North America
, Europe
and Oceania
; during the 1990's
.
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1990s
Overall
, it is clever
from Correct word choice
clear
pie
chart that the Correct article usage
the pie
percentage
of causes are close to each other and the highest proportion Fix the agreement mistake
percentages
has
over-grazing. From the Verb problem
is
table
we can see that the most Add a comma
table,
land
affected
in Add a missing verb
is affected
Europe
.
Over cultivation affected 28% of the land
, while
deforestation caused the degradation of 30% the
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of the
land
. The percentage of over-grazing is 35%, which is the highest from
all. Change preposition
of
Also
, 7% of soils were affected by other reasons.
Starting with North America
, we can see that 5% of the total land
is degraded, while
the proportions of Europe
and Oceania
are 23% and 13% respectively. Deforestation caused 0.2% of the land
in North America
. Europe
has the highest proportion of damage, showing 9.8%, while
in Oceania
- 1.7%. Over-cultivation didn't cause Oceania
during the 1990's, while
in Europe
- 7.7% and in North America
- 3.3 % of the land
damaged
by it. But over-grazing damaged Add a missing verb
was damaged
the
most of the Correct article usage
apply
land
in Oceania
, with index
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an index
11
%, Change preposition
of 11
while
in Europe
and North America
it shows 5.5% and 1.5% respectively.Add a comma
America,
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