The table shows the number of medals won by the top ten countries in the London 2022 Olympic Games .
The table gives information regarding the
amount
of models Change the quantifier
number
Correct pronoun usage
that were
were
accepted Change the verb form
was
via
ten countries in the London 2012 Olympic Games.
Change preposition
by
Overall
,it is clear that
gold
, silver , bronze
Correct word choice
and bronze
were
Unnecessary verb
apply
recieved
the highest proportion Correct your spelling
received
by
Change preposition
in
United
States Correct article usage
the United
while
Hungary got the lowest proportion in all three categories .
In China and Great Britain first recieved
29 and 24 numbers from Correct your spelling
received
gold
but the next categories were got 27 and 23 in China from silver and bronze . However
Great Add a comma
However,
Britain ' s
rate was lower namely 17,19 .
If Change noun form
Britain's
i
Change the capitalization
I
campared
with Rassia and Correct your spelling
compared
compare
south
Karea , south Karea showed Capitalize word
South
total
Change the article
a total
the total
number
of 28 but Rassia 's total number
of
was 82. Germany Change preposition
apply
as well as
France almost got similar total numbers which were 44,34 . In addition
, Germany and France took same
numbers from Correct article usage
the same
gold
but others
were not Correct article usage
the others
same
level . In Change the article
the same
camprision
, Correct your spelling
comparison
Italy
and Australia's total levels were very different Change noun form
Italy's
in
Change preposition
at
which
28,35. Among other Correct pronoun usage
apply
countries
Change noun form
countries'
country's
gold
rate Australia got the lowest number
but Hungary's total number
of
was 17 Change preposition
apply
that
was the lowest result as Correct pronoun usage
which
campared
with Correct your spelling
compared
others
result . In Change noun form
others'
other's
gold
and bronze silver were
put just 8, 4,5 results via Hunger were almost lower.Correct subject-verb agreement
was
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words gold, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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