The line graph below shows the number of annual visits to Australia by overseas residents. The table below gives information on the country of origin where the visitors came from. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given.

The line graph below shows the number of annual visits to Australia by overseas residents. The table below

gives information on the country of origin where the visitors came from. Write a report for a university

lecturer describing the information given.
The data given respectively presented by the line charts and the table inform the annual
number
of visits in
Australia
in
four-decade
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a four-decade
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period
from 1975 to 2005 and the
number
of
visitors
by
country
origins for six different places in 1975 and 2005.
Overall
, it is notable that the
number
of tourists visiting
to
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Australia
significantly
increasing
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increased
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three times from the very first
period
recorded in 1975 to 2005.
Besides
, throughout
30-year
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a 30-year
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period
of observation, Japan
consistenly
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consistently
consistency
became the largest
contributors
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to
the
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apply
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Australia
's tourism by its
number
of
visitors
. In 1975, the
number
of overseas residents in
Australia
recorded as many as 10
millions
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million
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visitors
. By the time passed a decade, and two decades later, the total of tourists increased to 15
millions
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million
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and 25
millions
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million
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respectively. By the end of the observed
period
,
Australia
hosted 30
millions
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million
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visitors
to their
country
in 2005. Regarding
by
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its
country
origin
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of origin
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, Japan placed and remained
as
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in
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the first rank for
number
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a number
the number
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of tourists visiting
Australia
by the end of
given
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a given
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period
as many as 12
millions
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million
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visitors
. Meanwhile, China is the least
country
to visit
Australia
by the
number
of
visitors
recorded as many as less than a million
visitors
in 2005.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, australia, period, visitors, country, millions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 7 times.
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