The line graph below shows the number of annual visits to Australia by overseas residents. The table below gives information on the country of origin where the visitors came from. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given.
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The data given respectively presented by the line charts and the table inform the annual
number
of visits in Australia
in four-decade
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a four-decade
period
from 1975 to 2005 and the number
of visitors
by country
origins for six different places in 1975 and 2005.
Overall
, it is notable that the number
of tourists visiting to
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apply
Australia
significantly increasing
three times from the very first Wrong verb form
increased
period
recorded in 1975 to 2005. Besides
, throughout 30-year
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a 30-year
period
of observation, Japan consistenly
became the largest Correct your spelling
consistently
consistency
contributors
to Fix the agreement mistake
contributor
the
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apply
Australia
's tourism by its number
of visitors
.
In 1975, the number
of overseas residents in Australia
recorded as many as 10 millions
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million
visitors
. By the time passed a decade, and two decades later, the total of tourists increased to 15 millions
and 25 Change to singular
million
millions
respectively. By the end of the observed Change to singular
million
period
, Australia
hosted 30 millions
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million
visitors
to their country
in 2005.
Regarding by
its Change preposition
apply
country
origin
, Japan placed and remained Change preposition
of origin
as
the first rank for Change preposition
in
number
of tourists visiting Change the article
a number
the number
Australia
by the end of given
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a given
period
as many as 12 millions
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million
visitors
. Meanwhile, China is the least country
to visit Australia
by the number
of visitors
recorded as many as less than a million visitors
in 2005.Submitted by pedrothedawn on
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