The chart below show the percentage of the day working adults spent doing different activities in a particular country in 1958 and in 2008.

The bar pie chart describes

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working

adult

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adults

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how

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to spend

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a day with different activities in different

period

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of

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year

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1958 and 2008.

Overall

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activity

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took the highest amount of time in

both

periods

while

travelling to work

activity

was the least.

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pie chart shows that

,

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working was the highest amount of

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activity

as compared to others in

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periods, which was 33% and 42% respectively. Sleeping got

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second place

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activity

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times, which was 32% and 25% respectively. Going out with family and friends

activity

was 19% in 1958,

in contrast

,

this

activity

was reduced dramatically in 2008 which was 6%. Surprisingly, realxing at home

activity

got low interest among the working adults in 1958 which was 8% but

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interest

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increased in 2008 from 8% to 13%.

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, travelling to work and other activities

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the least amount of time

spending

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in

both

two periods.