The chart below show the percentage of the day working adults spent doing different activities in a particular country in 1958 and in 2008.
The bar pie chart describes
that
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how
the
working Correct article usage
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adult
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adults
how
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to spend
a day with different activities in different Change the verb form
spent
period
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periods
of
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between
year
1958 and 2008.
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years
Overall
from the perspective,working Linking Words
activity
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was
took the highest amount of time in Unnecessary verb
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both
periods Use synonyms
while
travelling to work Linking Words
activity
was the least.
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,
working was the highest amount of Remove the comma
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the
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activity
as compared to others in Use synonyms
both
periods, which was 33% and 42% respectively. Sleeping got Use synonyms
the
second place Correct article usage
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on
the Change preposition
in
activity
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in
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both
times, which was 32% and 25% respectively. Going out with family and friends Use synonyms
activity
was 19% in 1958, Use synonyms
in contrast
, Linking Words
this
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activity
was reduced dramatically in 2008 which was 6%. Surprisingly, realxing at home Use synonyms
activity
got low interest among the working adults in 1958 which was 8% but Use synonyms
this
interest Linking Words
was
increased in 2008 from 8% to 13%.
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In addition
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were
the least amount of time Correct subject-verb agreement
was
spending
in Change the form of the verb
spent
both
two periods.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words activity, both with synonyms.
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