Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. Write a letter to your friend. Say why a driving license is advantageous. Recommend a driving school. Give extra guidance/tips.
Dear Mr.Ahmed,
I am glad to hear from you after a long
time
and I am delighted you and your family very well . I received your letter about
you are interested Change preposition
that
learning
to drive definitely Change preposition
in learning
it
is Correct pronoun usage
apply
essential
to get Rephrase
definitely essential
driving
license and perfect decision Wrong verb form
a driver's
in
Change preposition
at
convenient
Add an article
a convenient
time
to learn due to
you completed the
bachelor’s degree in accounting Correct article usage
a
moreover
, in
Change preposition
at
this
time
you have two children you had
a driver to pick up and dropped you and you were not confortable during at that Wrong verb form
have
time
therefore
, get driving license will help you instantly.
I would like to introduce you the
Change preposition
to the
pleasent
school for learning to drive is the first school Correct your spelling
pleasant
opeaned
in Saudi Arabia there are more than 22 Correct your spelling
opened
trainer
Change to a plural noun
trainers
moreover
, they learn
you as Verb problem
teach
personal
trainer the cost Add an article
a personal
it
would be 300$ and can be less than that . On Correct pronoun usage
apply
other
Correct article usage
the other
hand
I want to Add a comma
hand,
proposal
to be safe when you are driving Replace the word
propose
before
driving check Capitalize word
Before
car
wheels and the fuel if is enough and don’t drive Correct article usage
the car
in
the road if you are not Change preposition
on
practice
in Wrong verb form
practising
the
school .
I will keep in touch .
Yours faithfully ,Correct article usage
apply
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coherence cohesion
The letter should be organized into clear paragraphs, each serving a specific purpose: explaining the advantages of a driving license, recommending a driving school, and offering additional tips. The ideas within the paragraphs should be developed and connected in a logical manner to improve coherence.
coherence cohesion
Use appropriate salutations and closings for informal letters. For example, use the friend's first name for a more personal touch, and end with a friendly closing such as 'Best wishes' or 'Take care'.
task achievement
You should fully address all parts of the task. While you have covered the three main points, each should be elaborated on in more depth to demonstrate a comprehensive understanding of the task.
task achievement
Maintain a consistent and suitable tone throughout your letter. An informal letter to a friend should be friendly and personal, and language should be appropriate to maintain this tone.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,