The chart below show the percentage of the day working adults spent doing different activities in a particular country in 1958 and in 2008.

The pie diagrams compare information about

people

doing

activities

between 1958 and 2008. Units are measured in percentage. In general, the most dominating activity is working in the presented years, at the same time

activities

, namely relaxing at home and travelling to work, illustrate a positive improvement. Meanwhile, going out with either friends or family depicts an extreme decline. As we can see working has

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the chart in 1958

due to

one-third percent of

people

doing

this

activity,

whereas

travelling to work merely obtained a tiny percentage. At the same point, sleeping became the second priority of

people

's

activities

because

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percentage gap with working.

Subsequently

, for relaxing at home or doing

others

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,

such

as playing sports or another hobby, not more than 10%

individuals

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of individuals

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did it.

Then

, 19% of

people

tended to hang out with their friends or family. Five decades later, working and sleeping

remainded

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remained

reminded

the favourite

activities

because each reached nearly a half

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and a third of inhabitants, respectively.

On the contrary

, the number of

people

going out with their family or friends

extremely

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dropped

at

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6%.

Then

, relaxing at home and travelling to work

had

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experienced almost a 7% growth.

Finally

, 6% of individuals steadily opt for doing others,

for instance

, playing sports or hobbies.