The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The map illustrates the layout of the central
library
which has been changed over 20 years. Overall
, it is evident that numerous facilities have been replaced such
as the lecture room
taking place children’s books
and the enquiry desk being replaced by the café.
First and foremost, tables and chairs have been removed from the centre of the library
. Besides
, the lecture room
has been renovated to the children’s books
while
the enquiry desk has been knocked down to build the café. Similarly
, the reading room
has been replaced by the computer room
. Moreover
, the information desk and self-service machines have been added on the eastern side of the library
.
In the corner of the library
, the CDs, videos and computer games room
has been demolished. Instead
, there is the construction of the children’s fiction books
as well as
the storytelling events. On the west side of the library
, the adult fiction books
room
has been removed to the opposite. Meanwhile, all reference books
have been developed here.Submitted by tonykim09 on
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words library, room, books with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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