The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
the given chart illustrates the quantities of
shops
changed for closures and Use synonyms
openings
in one country between 2011 and 2018.
In general, It saw a Use synonyms
dramatical
fluctuation in the closures of Replace the word
dramatic
shops
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in contrast
to the Linking Words
openings
of Use synonyms
shops
. Use synonyms
furthermore
, the Linking Words
data
for both closures and Use synonyms
openings
showed a declining trend during those periods.
the Use synonyms
data
on Use synonyms
openings
in 2011 reveals that it peaked at the highest points, Use synonyms
while
those figures never rebounded to or overtook its highest place.
from 2011 to 2012, the figure of Linking Words
openings
plunged sharply from 8500 to
4000, almost by twice times. And in the Use synonyms
last
three years, the number of new Linking Words
shops
changed in a stable way. As for the Use synonyms
data
of Use synonyms
shops
that closed, it experienced a great change from 2014 to 2016 the figure plummeted from around 6100 to below 1000 in 2015 which was the lowest Use synonyms
data
throughout seven years Use synonyms
then
the number rose again and reached approximately 5000.
all in all, the new Linking Words
shops
that opened were more than Use synonyms
number
of Change the article
a number
the number
shops
that closed Use synonyms
at the end
of those periods.Linking Words
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