In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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time when our kids could see flying cars and

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buses, or trucks on

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autopilot in the future. These new technologies have advantages and disadvantages, and of

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can impact the

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of simple citizens.

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the positive sides of

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vehicles

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the negative aspects? I'm in two minds about it. On the one hand,

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brand new

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technology

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can make peoples'

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better and lighter. With

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we can no

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worry about

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car accidents or human

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. Buses would be running exactly by schedule without delay and trucks would be

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safer because of the autopilot which can see the road with the help of

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cams that

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outside the vehicle.

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technologies

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today: Elon Musk, the CEO of Tesla constructed

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Cybertruck' which can

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post without

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driver

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even

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technology

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needs some updates, but even today it means that transport companies can no

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think about the salary of their

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exist.

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can

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bus and truck

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without the job. Many

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workplaces

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would disappear and

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crises

may appear. Even the most updated systems of autopilot can

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mistake may cause

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deaths. If the

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driverless delivery

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truck

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up in the middle of nowhere delivery may

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to be, because no one can fix the vehicle if there is no driver. In

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Stephen Speilberg's 'Element No.5', we can see flying cars without

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world the economic situation is very deplorable, people literally breaking down the lights on the streets to

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the government about their situation. It can be

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good example to not hurry about the new

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a cool and

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innovation that will make

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better or worse. Humanity needs to think twice before

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through

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the lives

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of simple folk.

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While you did present both sides of the argument, the essay could be improved by clearly stating your own view and extending the argument by discussing why one outweighs the other based on specific and well-developed points.

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Support your main points with specific examples that are fully developed. Drawing on real-life data or hypothetical situations can lend strength to your argument. Avoid vague statements or overgeneralization.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

Fully explain your ideas

Some people feel that cities should allow for spaces for graffiti while others feel it should be banned. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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The world today is a safer place and governments should stop spending large amounts of money on their armed forces. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Social media has completely changed the way family and friends communicate with each other. What ore the reasons for this? Is this a positive or negative development?