the maps below shows an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site
The given diagrams illustrate the transformation of the Norbiton industrial
area
before and after development. Overall
, factories in the current industrial area
will be replaced by housing areas. Additionally
, there will be facilities such
as shops, a hospital, a playground and a school close to the housing area
.
The current industrial area
in Norbiton consists of several factories in between a road and a river
. In addition
, on the north side
of the area
, there is a river
and a
farmland beyond the Remove the article
apply
river
. While
on the west side
, a town can be found.
After the future development, there will be the demolishment of the factories and housing complex
are going to be constructed. Starting on the north Fix the agreement mistake
complexes
side
of the area
, the river
will be separated into two by a road which leads to more housing. Furthermore
, farmland will be maintained and surrounded the
farthest north housing Change preposition
by the
area
. In the Far East, a school and a playground are planning to be introduced. Meanwhile, a medical centre and shops will be developed on the south side
of the area
. In addition
to those facilities, new straight and roundabout roads will be added.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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