The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Austrailian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
The first
pie
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chart
illustrates how much Use synonyms
energy
is used Use synonyms
to
each Change preposition
for
reason
in Australian Use synonyms
farm
. The second Fix the agreement mistake
farms
pie
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chart
gives information about greenhouse Use synonyms
gassing
because of Replace the word
gasses
this
Linking Words
energy
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using
.
In general, Replace the word
use
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proportion
of reasons Add an article
the proportion
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energy
Change preposition
for energy
using
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use
are
substantially changed and Verb problem
has
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proportion
of gassing Correct article usage
the proportion
is surged
.
As is presented in the first Change to the active voice
surges
has surged
pie
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chart
, the main Use synonyms
reason
why Use synonyms
energy
is used is heating, which Use synonyms
occupied
just under half part. The second Wrong verb form
occupies
reason
is water heating, which is nearly Use synonyms
one third
of Add a hyphen
one-third
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pie
Correct article usage
the pie
chart
, refrigeration is used Use synonyms
an
insignificant minority of Change preposition
as an
energy
. Meanwhile, lighting and cooling Use synonyms
is
used onlyChange the verb form
are
a
tiny function of Change preposition
as a
energy
, which Use synonyms
using
is insignificant. When it comes to other appliances, Verb problem
apply
by
Change preposition
apply
this
cause Linking Words
is used
a small minority Wrong verb form
uses
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energy
.
As can be seen in the second Change preposition
of energy
chart
, Use synonyms
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proportion
of gassing Add an article
the proportion
is
differed from the previous Unnecessary verb
apply
chart
. It can be clearly observed that the Use synonyms
proportion
of refrigeration by gassing is soar, Use synonyms
also
the pattern is not Linking Words
complete
reversed when it comes to lighting and other appliances, the proportions Change the word
completely
is
doubled Change the verb form
are
in
both Change preposition
for
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reason
. Fix the agreement mistake
reasons
However
, the per Linking Words
cents
of heating is reduced by greenhouse gassing. It is worth noticing that, the Fix the agreement mistake
cent
proportion
of water heating and cooling Use synonyms
have
not Correct subject-verb agreement
has
significant
changes Change the word
significantly
by
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as
the
result Correct article usage
a
from
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of
energy
use.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words pie, chart, energy, reason, proportion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 6 times.
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