The bar graph shows the global sales (in billions of dollars) of different types of digital games between 2000 and 2006

The chart illustrates data about the worldwide

trades

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trade

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of various types of numerical

games

during 6 years from 2000 to 2006 It can be seen from the graph that the sales of

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handhold

games

increased gradually from 11

billion

dollars

to 18

billion

dollars

between the years 2000 and 2006.

Ont

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the other hand the

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of

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console

games

declained

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decreased

moderately from 6

billion

dollars

to 2

billion

dollars

during

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6 years respectively. First of all,the market

of

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online

games

began to grow in 2001. And

then

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games’

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games

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market went up gradually between 0,5

billion

dollars

and 9

billion

dollars

form

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2001 to 2006.

Furthermore

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mobile phone

games

rose steadily between 2002 and 2006, reaching a peak of about 7

billion

dollars

at the end

of the period. In 2006 , the market

of

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console

games

were

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the lowest figure in the chart with about 3

billion

dollars

.