Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

It is said that, Nowadays, There

are

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a massive

similarity

between the nations.

Due to

using the same products.

While

,

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some people believe that there are several benefits

from

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this

resembling, I believe the drawbacks, Which will be discussed, Are more substantial.

To begin

with, There is no doubt that there are some benefits from

this

similarity

. One of

this

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benefits is the increment in commercial activity.

As a result

of consuming the same items.

In addition

, the number of

job

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in trade exchange operations will increase.

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, Apple stores

that

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are available in every

countries

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one of them that has provided numerous

jobs

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opportunities.

Therefore

, all goods will be available in their towns

instead

of waiting

soo

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much for their orders.

On the other hand

, the main problem

from

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this

similarity

is that

transpoting

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transporting

transposing

goods can lead to

an

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invironmental

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environmental

issues.

This

is because

consuming

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fossil fuels, which is releasing carbon dioxide in the atmosphere.

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,

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the increment of carbon dioxide in our atmosphere

it

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will accelerate

global

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warming process and cause extinction for some animals. Another issue another issue will happen

due to

this

resembling, Is the loss of self-identity for each country.

It

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will be no difference in religions or cultures because of the impact of

this

trend. In conclusion, From my

perspetive

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perspective

, I believe that the

similarity

between the nations has negative aspects more than its

psitives

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positives

positive

.

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as

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The loss of

self identity

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.

For

this

reason

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we must preserve each identity

for

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every country