THE DIAGRAM BELOW SHOWS THE PROCESS BY WHICH BRICKS ARE MANUFACTURED FOR THE BUILDING INDUSTRY.
The diagram
show
the various stages in the production of brick manufacturing. Change the verb form
shows
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that, the bricks using
in the building industry.
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Overall
, the brick manufactering
has especially 7 steps and Correct your spelling
manufacturing
clearly
man-made production. Add a missing verb
is clearly
However
the process can be divided into 3 main stages beginning with digging and cleaning, followed by sorting and Add a comma
However,
finally
further
storage and transportation to product shops.
Firstly
, the process begins when the clay is dug with a tractor. From this
point, it combine
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combines
along with
the metal grid in the roller. Thirdly
, before the next step the mass that came out is added sand and water. The next stage is wire cuttering
and doing the moulds for bricks. Following, the result drying oven within 1-2 days. After that, it is Correct your spelling
cutting
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drying Correct your spelling
moderately
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870*C-1300*C, in the Change preposition
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the bricks Add a comma
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are saved
cooling
chamber within 2-3 days. Eventually, the end-product packaging and delivery to shops.Add an article
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