THE DIAGRAM BELOW SHOWS THE PROCESS BY WHICH BRICKS ARE MANUFACTURED FOR THE BUILDING INDUSTRY.

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the various stages in the production of brick manufacturing.

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that, the bricks

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in the building industry.

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, the brick

manufactering

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manufacturing

has especially 7 steps and

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man-made production.

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the process can be divided into 3 main stages beginning with digging and cleaning, followed by sorting and

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further

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storage and transportation to product shops.

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, the process begins when the clay is dug with a tractor. From

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point, it

combine

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along with

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the metal grid in the roller.

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, before the next step the mass that came out is added sand and water. The next stage is wire

cuttering

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cutting

and doing the moulds for bricks. Following, the result drying oven within 1-2 days. After that, it is

moderatly

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moderately

drying

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200*C-980*C and highly drying

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870*C-1300*C, in the

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the bricks

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in

cooling

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chamber within 2-3 days. Eventually, the end-product packaging and delivery to shops.