In recent years, there has been a significant increase in the number of oil drilling operations in remote locations around the world. This has brought economic benefits to some countries, though it has also raised concerns about the environmental impact of these operations. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
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an isolated
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the world
number of
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apply
oil
drilling operations are carried out and many believe that it will have significant benefit to Use synonyms
economy
of a nation Add an article
the economy
while
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argues
that it Change the verb form
argue
posses
serious Wrong verb form
possesses
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environment
implications. Replace the word
environmental
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negative
impact on Add an article
a negative
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environment
. Add an article
the environment
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this
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essay
we will discuss both sides with suitable examples.
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essay,
oil
drilling in remote locations has Use synonyms
significant
effect on the Add an article
a significant
environment
. During Use synonyms
Use synonyms
oil
drilling process, it releases Add an article
the oil
adequate
amount of Add an article
an adequate
the adequate
green house
gases which have Correct your spelling
greenhouse
significant
impact on Add an article
a significant
earth
causing Correct article usage
the earth
increase
in global temperature. Add an article
an increase
the increase
Moreover
, during initial setup, Linking Words
oil
spillage is common on Use synonyms
water
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the water
surface
which not only causes water pollution but if it is not controlled, it will have Fix the agreement mistake
surfaces
prolonged
Correct article usage
a prolonged
affect
on marine life. Replace the word
effect
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report
published by Add an article
a report
the report
climate
control agency of Europe, Correct article usage
the climate
From
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In
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last
few years with the increase in Correct article usage
the last
number
of Change the article
a number
the number
oil
rigs, Use synonyms
melting
rate of Correct article usage
the melting
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the glacier
glacier
has increased by thirty Fix the agreement mistake
glaciers
percent
.
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per cent
On the other hand
, Linking Words
development
of more Correct article usage
the development
oil
drilling platforms helps Use synonyms
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country
in increasing Add an article
the country
their
revenue. Correct pronoun usage
its
Oil
rig operations not only provide livelihood to the people living in that area but Use synonyms
also
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makes
that Correct subject-verb agreement
make
country
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self sufficient
in energy. Add a hyphen
self-sufficient
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, Linking Words
Use synonyms
country
can earn foreign exchange by exporting Add an article
the country
a country
oil
to other nations. Use synonyms
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, as per Linking Words
study
revealed by Correct article usage
a study
leading
economic news paper, Correct article usage
a leading
from
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in
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last
few years, Correct article usage
the last
growth
rate of Add an article
the growth
a growth
oil
exporting countries Use synonyms
have been
increased from four to ten percent Wrong verb form
has
where
Rephrase
apply
as
for other nations Change preposition
whereas
its
still below five percent.
In conclusion, Replace the word
it's
it is
although
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oil
drilling in remote locations helps Use synonyms
Use synonyms
country
Add an article
the country
in generating
more dollars Wrong verb form
generate
but
Remove the conjunction
apply
Linking Words
due
to release of Change preposition
apply
green house
gases during Correct your spelling
greenhouse
drilling
process Correct article usage
the drilling
it
negatively affects the Correct pronoun usage
apply
environment
. Use synonyms
Due to
lateral Linking Words
reason
, I believe Fix the agreement mistake
reasons
drilling
of Correct article usage
the drilling
oil
from remote Use synonyms
location
should be reduced so that Fix the agreement mistake
locations
earth
can be protected from Correct article usage
the earth
adverse
Add an article
the adverse
an adverse
effect
of pollution.Fix the agreement mistake
effects
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