All cars that burns fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them do you agree or disagree?

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All vehicles that
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fuels
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should be banned and fully electric
cars
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should
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use
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in place of them.In
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essay,I will explain both views and give my opinion with arguments.
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of
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look at
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view that most of transport
use
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fossil
fuels
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should banned.The
first
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point which
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this
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stance is that these type of
cars
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are dangerous to the environment.
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,it is
genrally
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generally
believed that smoke which is
produed
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produced
by vehicles.Smoke disturbed our
ecosytem
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ecosystem
badly.So,all
cars
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use
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that use
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fuels
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should be banned.The second reason which
support
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this
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view is that
fuels
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are
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non renewable
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source.
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high
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uses of fuel in
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the engines
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of
cars
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, the source depleted at
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faster pace
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then
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it should be.So, all
cars
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should be banned that
uses
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use
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fossil
fuels
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.
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, electric
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should replace them. The
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ground which
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view is electric
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are too expensive.
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, it is considered that not all people can purchase EV
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.If only these types of
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is
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available to
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than
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it
effect
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general
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public badly.They can not go
where ever
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wherever
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they want. So,it is not fully acceptable at
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time.The second argument which
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this
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statement is unawareness of its
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.It is
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believed
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public
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is still not ready to face
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kind of technology
espically
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especially
in developing countries.
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it is not possible at
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time. In conclusion
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all vehicles that
use
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fuels
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should be banned (dangerous to the environment and
fuels
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are
non renewable
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non-renewable
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source
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sources
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) and fully electric
cars
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should
be
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use
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in place of them(electric
cars
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are too expensive and
unawareness
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of
its
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use
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.I disagree with
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statement.
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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