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The table below gives information on the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets.

The table below gives information on the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets.
#information #proportion #carbohydrates #protein #three #diets
The pie charts compare the
differents
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differences
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 in carbonhydrates,
protein
 and fat of
variety
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a variety
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diets
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of diets
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. In general,
although
 the highest percentage accounted for
carbohydrates
 in all three figures, in average
diet
protein
 has the same proportion
with
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as
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 these. In
average
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an average
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diet
, both
carbohydrates
 and
protein
 account for the same percentage, at 40%. Meanwhile, fat is twice time lower, at 20%, which is the lowest category. In the healthy
diet
, there is a half accounting for
carbohydrates
, which is the highest.
Furthermore
, the next highest percentage
represent
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is represented
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 by
protein
 and fat, at 30% and 20%, respectively. In
healthy
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a healthy
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diet
 for sport,
carbohydrates
still
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are still
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 the highest among
three
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the three
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 figures, followed by
protein
 and fat, at 25% and 15%, respectively.
Moreover
,
although
 the healthy
diet
 for sport has the highest level of
carbohydrates
 among these figures, at 60%, its fat is the lowest, at only 15%. The highest level of
protein
accoungted
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accounted
 for
average
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the average
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diet
, at 40%. Both
average
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the average
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diet
 and healthy
diet
has
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have
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 the same level of fat (20%).
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "although".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words protein, carbohydrates, diet with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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