nowadays many young people use social media do the advantages outweigh disadvantages

In a society of technology, it is not difficult to

use

networking, especially

youngsters

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. In my point of view, there are more benefits outweigh

drawbacks

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essay will discuss the reasons. The development of technology

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chances for young people to

use

social networking without any knowledge of protection themselves.

Firstly

, there are many scammers on these types of digital platforms that juveniles do not know how to avoid them.

As a result

, they can deal with dangerous situations

such

as loss of money.

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of

this

social networking platform,

youngsters

might upload their personal information public by chance.

Therefore

, their real life can be in danger, and scammers can

use

this

information to do illegal work. For these reasons, until

youngsters

are prepared with enough knowledge to protect themselves on

this

platform, parents should not allow them to

use

it.

However

, teenagers have permission to

use

technological devices because of their variety of benefits. First of all, social media brings children a large source of relationships from the whole world. To

further

explain, because of the connections around the world,

youngsters

can make friends in other nations and improve their relationships.

Moreover

, they can exchange their national cultures with their friends,

therefore

not only their knowledge is improved but

also

their cultures are shared with people in the other nations.

Finally

, more and more

youngsters

are learning foreign languages. For that reason, if they can contact local people through social networking and talk with them regularly, their ability

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language will increase significantly. Because of these reasons, using social networking brings

youngsters

many opportunities to mature and improve themselves. In conclusion, allowing juveniles to

use

social networks early will have both negative and positive effects.

However

, in my opinion, it brings more benefits than drawbacks to them.