The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph shows information about the number of foreign tourists to different places
such
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as the
coast
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, the mountains, and the
lakes
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in a European country between 1987 and 2007. As can be seen from the line graph, it is obvious that those who consider visiting the
coast
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and the
lakes
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are the most popular. If we look at people who travel in the mountains in Europe, there is a gradual increase with 20 to 30 from 1987 and 1992 or one decade following a remain constant until 2002, and
then
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return to rise again with 35 in the
last
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year. In detail, people who visit the lake are a minimum of start with 10, but the number of tourists dramatically increases year on year. with respect to the number of people who are interested in the
coast
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start with 40 and
then
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decrease with 35, after rocketing to just over 70.
While
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the
lakes
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were the peak level of tourists in 2002, the
coast
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will peak in 2007. In conclusion, most individuals prefer the
coast
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and the
lakes
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with 75.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words coast, lakes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fluctuate
  • Significant
  • Trends
  • Comparative analysis
  • Peak
  • Trough
  • Growth
  • Decline
  • Steady
  • Surge
  • Plummet
  • Consistency
  • Highlight
  • Reinforce
  • Data representation
  • Time frame
  • Subject matter
  • Overseas visitors
  • Tourism promotion
  • Transportation
  • Accommodation facilities
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