There have been several complaints about the reception area where visitors to your company arrive. Your manager has asked you to suggest how the reception area could be improved. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter • describe the complaints that have been made • say why the reception area is important • suggest how the reception area could be
Dear Mr. Houck,
I am writing
this
letter report the recent complaints regarding the express packages receiving issue at our reception
desk. As more employees choose to deliver their goods purchased from online stores to our company's address, the part of the area is often occupied by those packages not claimed and fetched by their real consignees immediately.
It is commonly recognized that the reception
procedure is an essential VI (Visual Identity) part of any organization. A well-organized reception
area can build up a great first impression for our customers, suppliers, and business partners when they are visiting
our office in person. Wrong verb form
visit
That is
why I am concerned about the disorder of those mismanaged packages.
I would propose a separate mail-receiving spot to accommodate all the mail, and our small storage room could be an ideal alternative. It is just next to the reception
area and easy for the receptionist to supervise, while
the reception
can be maintained in a clean and tidy order.
I would appreciate your consideration and approval.
Yours sincerely,
AntoineSubmitted by huaixiangdong on
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Ensure that each paragraph presents a clear and distinct idea, without mixing different concerns or suggestions.
Task Achievement
Expand on the specific complaints about the reception area; more detailed examples would create a fuller picture and satisfy task response criteria.
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To improve the logical structure, present problems and solutions more systematically, with clearer transitions between points.
Task Achievement
The greeting and closing are appropriate, demonstrating a formal and polite tone that is well-suited for the context.