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The graph below gives information about how much people in the United States and the United Kingdom spend on petrol. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about how much people in the United States and the United Kingdom spend on petrol. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the people in the United States and the United Kingdom who spent their
income
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 on petrol. The data is calibrated in terms of percentage.
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, it is clearly seen that both the United Kingdom and well United States followed a downward trend at
last
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.
According to
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 the given data, nearly 0.5 per cent of
income
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 was spent by poor people in the UK. Afterwards, it showed a sharp increment of nearly 3% by middle-class individuals. Surprisingly, the richest people spent 4 per cent of their
income
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 and at
last
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, the figure illustrates a slight decrease of just 1%. Moving
further
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, in the United States almost 4 per cent of savings was spent by the poorest as well and the figure showed a slight increase and reached 5. Meanwhile, the middle masses spent
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4% of their
income
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 and at
last
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, it followed a downward trend and reached 2%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words income with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "illustrates" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "downward" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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