Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In every second of human life, a person will always make decisions. Whether it
was
small like what clothes to wear or a big decision like a career to choose, it must be decided before moving on to the next decision. Wrong verb form
is
However
, the accessibility to information makes the option
seem to be unlimited and it depends on the person to choose their option
. This
essay will outline why there are so many choices available.
First of all, choices appear because there is more than one option
, and the options heavily depend on the knowledge of the decision maker
. The knowledge might come from different sources and one of the practical ways to gain information is through the internet or social media. Add a hyphen
decision-maker
For example
, if someone wants to go online shopping and looking
it on Wrong verb form
look at
google
, we will find that we have to choose between Shopee, Tokopedia, Lazada and Capitalize word
Google
others
e-commerce. The amount and variation of options Correct quantifier usage
other
shows
that there are multiple choices to decide on.
Another example, Change the verb form
show
the
Add a missing verb
is the
option
to move from one place to another. If we go back in times
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time
for
about 200 years ago, the only Change preposition
to
option
was by walking or using animals as transportation
mode. Add an article
a transportation
Contrast
to modern times, we could choose different Change preposition
In contrast
mode
from commuter Fix the agreement mistake
modes
line
, Fix the agreement mistake
lines
mrt
, busway, or motorcycle. Correct your spelling
MRT
This
is all due to
the significant improvement in technologies
.
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technology
To conclude
, in my opinion, because of the present
of Replace the word
presence
Fix the agreement mistake
technology
technologies
we have many and various options to choose from in our life compared to centuries before.Add a comma
technologies,
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- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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