You learned a piece of news from your friend regarding a part-time job at a new International company near your house. Write a letter to that company. In your letter, you should Explain why you need that job. Give the details what you can do for the company. *Suggest the time that you can work.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you to express my interest in your

job

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I learned a piece of news from my friend regarding a part-time

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at your company. As I have got into financial difficulties, I am studying at the moment.

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, I am looking

job

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near my house. I am a native English speaker and I have

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ample knowledge of six languages which are Russian, Italian, Chinese, Spanish, Arabic and Korean.

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, I have got

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overall

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band score

9.0

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from IELTS.

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, I am very sociable and friendly

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able to communicate with different countries people. I believe that I am the most suitable candidate for

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job

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because of my ambition and communication

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. I noticed that

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is a part-time

job

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. My preferred day for working five days

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a week

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and evenings. I believe that my

skills-set

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your requirements. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully,

XXXXXX

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task achievement

Ensure you address all aspects of the task prompt in ample detail. For example, explain why the job is necessary beyond financial reasons, such as career aspirations or personal development.

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Maintain a formal tone throughout the letter as it is addressed to a company. Avoid informal phrases and ensure the word choice is appropriate for a job application.

coherence & cohesion

Create a coherent structure in the letter by organizing it into clear paragraphs, each covering a different point as required by the task.

coherence & cohesion

Use appropriate transitions and cohesive devices to connect ideas and paragraphs smoothly.

coherence & cohesion

In your introduction and conclusion, use formal greetings and sign-offs suitable for job applications.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

10 paragraphs

167 words

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