The pie charts compare water usage in San Diego, California and the rest of the world.

The pie charts compare water usage in San Diego, California and the rest of the world.
The pie charts compare how
water
is used in
San
Diego
County,
California
and worldwide.
Overall
,
while
San
Diego
County and
California
use
water
mostly for residential purposes and least for agriculture, the reverse can be said of the worldwide usage of
water
. In detail, residential
water
use
makes up three-fifths
in
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San
Diego
;
however
,
this
figure is significantly smaller for
California
, at 39%. The amount of
water
used in the industrial sector in both areas ranks second with about a quarter and a third respectively. Interestingly, both
San
Diego
and
California
are shown to
use
the least amount of
water
for agricultural purposes, with corresponding figures of 17% and 28%. Worldwide
water
allocation,
however
, is remarkably different than that of
San
Diego
County and
California
. Agricultural
use
of
water
around the globe accounts for by far the highest figure, with well over two-thirds.
In contrast
, the figures for industrial and domestic
water
use
are substantially smaller. The former constitutes 23%, which is nearly three times as much as that of the latter.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, san, diego, california, use with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "compare" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • households
  • significant
  • industrial use
  • implications
  • agriculture
  • geographical
  • climatic
  • economic factors
  • patterns
  • sustainability
  • practices
  • surprising
  • exceptionally
  • improvements
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