The most important aim of science should be improve peoples lives . to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ?
The main goal of
science
is enhanced
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to enhance
living
standard of Correct article usage
the living
people
lives. I agree with Change noun form
people's
this
statement because individuals can improve bonding by using scientific inventions and improve
their workability.
To Wrong verb form
improving
being
with, Verb problem
begin
science
creates revolution
in Add an article
a revolution
communication
sector. In the past, it took Add an article
the communication
long
day to reach news to other Add an article
a long
people
because people
used pigeon
, Fix the agreement mistake
pigeons
telegram
etc. But in the modern technological Fix the agreement mistake
telegrams
era
Add a comma
era,
people
share their news instantly through social media like Facebook, Youtube
, Correct your spelling
YouTube
Instagram
. Correct word choice
and Instagram
Therefore
, people
can connect their
near and dear ones by using social media. Change preposition
with their
For example
, In Bangladesh, most of the people
live in Add an article
the middle
middle east
for Correct your spelling
Middle East
living
their livelihood but they connect with their family and villagers through online communication systems. Verb problem
apply
Thus
, science
helps to raise bonding among the people
.
Further
, the workability of a
Change the article
an
employee
has grown dramatically since last
decade. After the industrial revolution Correct article usage
the last
since
Change preposition
in
last
decade. After the industrial Correct article usage
the last
revolution
Add a comma
revolution,
science
has been used in many corporations. By using computer
, Add an article
a computer
the computer
employee
can calculate and Fix the agreement mistake
employees
produced
many products instantly. Not only production but Change the verb form
produce
also
employee
can research smoothly by using scientific inventions. Fix the agreement mistake
employees
For example
, In the past, In banking sectors, it took a year to know
about Verb problem
learn
balance
sheet and income summary details. But now computer-generated balance sheet helps us get the Add an article
the balance
overall
scenario on
Change preposition
of
a
institution Change the article
an
helps
Correct word choice
and helps
a
Change the article
an
employee
to
improve workability.
In conclusion, most of the scientific invention are for the welfare of humankind. But Verb problem
apply
create
bonding among Wrong verb form
creating
the
Correct article usage
apply
people
and improve
Wrong verb form
improving
work ability
are the advantages of scientific invention.Correct your spelling
workability
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