The Graph below gives instragram about the percentage of the population in four asian countries living in cities from 1970to 2020 with prediction for 2030 and 2040.
The pair of maps indicates that the medical centre had changed between the
year
2008 and 2010.
Fix the agreement mistake
years
Overall
, it can be seen that the plan of medical
centre showed dramatic changes, especially doctors and Correct article usage
the medical
patients facility
have increased.
In the first Fix the agreement mistake
patient facilities
map
, it can be seen that there was a main entrance south side
of the map
and large
waiting Correct article usage
a large
room
exists for the patients. Besides
, left side
of the waiting room
a laboratory room
situated
. Add a missing verb
is situated
A part
from these rooms, there was a corridor, office Correct your spelling
Apart
staffs
, Fix the agreement mistake
staff
doctors
, Correct word choice
and doctors
used
it Correct pronoun usage
who used
for went
to Change preposition
to go
doctors’
office and treatment Correct article usage
the doctors’
room
. Further
, three doctors’ room
have Fix the agreement mistake
rooms
built
north Add a missing verb
been built
side
of the map
.
In 2010, the medical centre looked more facilited
for the patients. Doctors’ offices have increased. In north Correct your spelling
facilitated
facilities
eastern
part of the Correct word choice
northeastern
map
a store Add a comma
map,
room
added
. Add a missing verb
was added
Similarly
, In the east side
and south weasten
Correct your spelling
western
eastern
part
of the Fix the agreement mistake
parts
map
a store Add a comma
map,
room
, education room
and mother child
Add a hyphen
mother-child
room
built
. Add a missing verb
were built
However
, remaining
all rooms remained unchanged like Verb problem
apply
staff
office, reception, laboratory and treatment Correct article usage
the staff
room
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Vocabulary: Replace the words map, side, room with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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