The bar chart showed the percentage of school children learning to play four different musical instruments (violin, guitar, piano, drums) in 3 years 2005, 2010, 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart compares the differences in the quantity of
school children
between four types of Correct your spelling
schoolchildren
music
instruments, namely Replace the word
musical
Piano
, Guitar
, Drums
, and Violin
, over 10-year
duration, starting from 2005.
Add an article
a 10-year
Overall
, all instruments, which were enrolled to learn, depicted an increase over time, with the exception of Violin
. Correct article usage
the Violin
Moreover
, both Guitar
and Piano
were the most popular for trainees in all surveyed years.
In 2005, starting with around 11%, Piano
and Guitar
were still higher than Drums
- the most unpopular music instruments in
Change preposition
at
this
time - by 5
% gap in the Correct article usage
a 5
amount
of learners. By 2010, Change the quantifier
number
this
gap quadrupled and depicted that both Piano
and Guitar
students had doubled to approximately 20% and 18% respectively, whilst the figure for Drums
had remained unchanged at 5%. In accordance with Violin
, in contract, it witnessed an advert pattern which marginally declined by 2%.
According to
the number of Guitar
enrolments, in 2015, this
instrument was the most rapid rise, reaching the top at 40% and being higher than Violin
by only 2%. After staying unchanged in 2010, Drums
doubled to around 10% at the ending
of time. Replace the word
end
However
, Violin
learners had a tendency to drop to the lowest point in 2015.Submitted by cdiemquynh009 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words piano, guitar, drums, violin with synonyms.
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