The diagram below shows the stages in processing cocoa beans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The flow chart below illustrates how the
cocoa
beans are processed with various stages involved.
Use synonyms
Overall
, there are three main stages with many small steps required at each stage, beginning with the harvesting of whole beans and ending with the finished products for consumption.
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First,
the Linking Words
cocoa
beans are picked Use synonyms
then
the shells are removed before they are dried and pressed into Linking Words
cocoa
liquor. Use synonyms
Next,
the liquid is proceeded to the next steps which are Linking Words
further
pressing or refining based on the purpose of selling the products. When the liquor undergoes the stage of pressing, it is turned into cake or only Linking Words
cocoa
. Use synonyms
Subsequently
, the cake is ground into powder which can be delivered to the customer at Linking Words
this
stage. Linking Words
However
, Linking Words
cocoa
can be provided for other industries where they are made into cakes or drinks afterwards.
Part of the Use synonyms
cocoa
liquid is not processed Use synonyms
further
but is refined in step 2, it is Linking Words
then
added with sugar to produce industrial chocolate before being processed into the finished chocolate goods. Linking Words
Finally
, they are ready to be sold to general consumers.Linking Words
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