The diagram below shows the stages in processing cocoa beans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the stages in processing cocoa beans.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make

comparisons where relevant.
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The flow chart below illustrates how the
cocoa
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beans are processed with various stages involved.
Overall
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, there are three main stages with many small steps required at each stage, beginning with the harvesting of whole beans and ending with the finished products for consumption.
First,
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the
cocoa
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beans are picked
then
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the shells are removed before they are dried and pressed into
cocoa
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liquor.
Next,
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the liquid is proceeded to the next steps which are
further
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pressing or refining based on the purpose of selling the products. When the liquor undergoes the stage of pressing, it is turned into cake or only
cocoa
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.
Subsequently
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, the cake is ground into powder which can be delivered to the customer at
this
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stage.
However
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,
cocoa
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can be provided for other industries where they are made into cakes or drinks afterwards. Part of the
cocoa
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liquid is not processed
further
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but is refined in step 2, it is
then
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added with sugar to produce industrial chocolate before being processed into the finished chocolate goods.
Finally
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, they are ready to be sold to general consumers.
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