The diagram below shows the stages in processing cocoa beans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The flow chart below illustrates how the
cocoa
beans are processed with various stages involved.
Overall
, there are three main stages with many small steps required at each stage, beginning with the harvesting of whole beans and ending with the finished products for consumption.
First,
the cocoa
beans are picked then
the shells are removed before they are dried and pressed into cocoa
liquor. Next,
the liquid is proceeded to the next steps which are further
pressing or refining based on the purpose of selling the products. When the liquor undergoes the stage of pressing, it is turned into cake or only cocoa
. Subsequently
, the cake is ground into powder which can be delivered to the customer at this
stage. However
, cocoa
can be provided for other industries where they are made into cakes or drinks afterwards.
Part of the cocoa
liquid is not processed further
but is refined in step 2, it is then
added with sugar to produce industrial chocolate before being processed into the finished chocolate goods. Finally
, they are ready to be sold to general consumers.Submitted by yennhicao24 on
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