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Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The data provides information about the average daily temperature and the number of rainfall
days
 each month for two Australian cities.
Overall
,
Brisbane
 and
Canberra
 have more heaters in
February
 and December and have more precipitation in
February
 and March, respectively.
It is clear that
 the average daily temperatures fluctuated over a year. both cities
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 shown maximum temperatures mostly at the beginning and the end of the year,
while
 in summertime temperatures tend to steadily decrease. The maximum temperature in
Brisbane
 was in
February
 when peaked at 30 Celsius and
Canberra
's highest degree was in both months
February
 and December, when rose to approximately 27 Celsius.
On the other hand
, the minimum degrees
also
 fluctuated and have shown minimum rates in the summer, June, July and August, respectively. The lowest temperature in
Brisbane
 is roughly 10 degrees Celsius.
Although
 in
Canberra
 it measured troughted at 2 Celsium. The number of rainy
days
 in the two Australian cities is mainly similar to warm
days
. There are
also
 more rainfall
days
 at the beginning of the year.
Brisbane
, on its own, peaked at 14 precipitation
days
 of the month in
February
 and March,
while
 for
Canberra
 it is 10
days
 in summer.
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The report needs to provide a clear overview that directly addresses the main features and makes relevant comparisons. Ensure that the overall trend is correctly described, and the summary contains the key points.
coherence cohesion
Work on structuring the essay in a logical way. Use clear paragraphs, each with a central idea, supported by specific details from the data provided.
coherence cohesion
Use a range of cohesive devices accurately and effectively to help the reader follow the progression of ideas and information throughout the essay.

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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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