the chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.

the chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.
The given bar chart illustrates
allocation
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the allocation
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of eight different
expenses
on
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in
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a specific country in the
year
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years
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1968 and 2018.
Overall
, expenditure on food was the highest in 1968.
In contrast
, leisure comprised the highest
expenses
in 2018.
Additionally
, fuel remained the lowest expense
on
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in
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both periods. In 1968, 35% of weekly earnings
was
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were
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used for food consumption, which represented more than thrice
expenses
on housing or fashion items. The other aspects
such
as household goods, physical goods and transport had
the
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a
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similar percentage which
were
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was
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approximately 15%,
whereas
leisure had
slightly
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a slightly
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higher proportion (about 18%). In regard to expense in 2018, spending in leisure
were
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the highest among other categories which made up around 23%.
Expenses
on food and housing were between 16-18%. Transport,
on the other hand
, took around 14% of the total weekly income
per-household
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per household
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.
Conversely
, fuel and power; clothing
and
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apply
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footwear and personal goods only
comprises
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of
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less than 10% of revenue weekly each.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words expenses with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Weekly income
  • Expenditure
  • Consumption patterns
  • Cost of living
  • Discretionary spending
  • Inflation
  • Economic indicators
  • Demographics
  • Socio-economic factors
  • Technology advancements
  • Government policies
  • Consumerism
  • Lifestyle changes
  • Fiscal habits
  • Budget allocation
  • Financial priorities
  • Societal trends
  • Purchasing power
  • Income distribution
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