the chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018
The bar chart illustrates
percentage
of families' weekly expenditures compared to weekly incomes in 1968 and 2018. The expenditures are classified into eight groups.
In general, household mostly spent their income Add an article
the percentage
for
food in 1968. Change preposition
on
In contrast
, leisure was the most significant expenses
in 2018. Fix the agreement mistake
expense
While
other categories were fluctuated
, household goods Change to the active voice
fluctuated
have fluctuated
maintained
stable.
In 1968, families spent more than a third of their incomes Verb problem
remained
for
food (35%) and it decreased Change preposition
on
half
to 17.5% in 2018. Other significant expenses Change preposition
by half
was
housing Change the verb form
were
as well as
clothing and footware
which is 10%. Correct your spelling
footwear
On the other hand
, biggest
expenditure in 2018 was leisure which increased approximately triple. Correct article usage
the biggest
Other
significant expenditure in 2018 was housing Change the wording
Another
that
rose almost double (19%). Correct pronoun usage
which
In addition
, transport increased mostly 5%. In contrast
, other groups which dropped were fuel and power, clothing and footware
, Correct your spelling
footwear
personal
goods. Both in 1968 and 2018, families spent Correct word choice
and personal
least
on fuel and power not more than 10%.Correct article usage
the least
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