The bar chart below shows the estimated sales of jeans for two companies next year in Turkey. The pie chart shows the projected market share of the two companies in jeans at the end of next year.
The column graph gives a projection
on
the next year’s Change preposition
of
jeans
sales of two companies in Turkey while
the pie chart compares their estimated market
share
. Overall
, jeans
sales are estimated to increase at
the Change preposition
in
last
quarter
next
year and Change preposition
of next
Jack
& Correct article usage
the Jack
Jones
brand is anticipated to have half of the market
share
.
According to
the first graph, Jack
& Correct article usage
the Jack
Jones
jeans
clothing sale
will be roughly 450 thousand
pairs in Turkey, which is almost three times higher than that of Mango
brand. At Correct article usage
the Mango
end
of the first Correct article usage
the end
quarter
, Jack & Jones
is estimated to sell 300 thousand
pairs of jeans
in Turkey while
it would be just above 150 thousand
for Mango
. In July and August, the demand for Mango
jeans
is estimated to exceed the demand of Jack & Jones
. However
, Jack & Jones
is likely to witness a hike in its jeans
sale
during the Fix the agreement mistake
sales
last
quarter
of the year and in December it will sell 900,000 pairs, double than
its Change preposition
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sale
in January. During the Fix the agreement mistake
sales
last
quarter
, Mango
jean’s sale
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sales
would remain
almost the same exceptWrong verb form
remained
a
surge in December to 600 Change preposition
for a
thousand
sales.
It is predicted that Jack & Jones
alone will control the
half of the Correct article usage
apply
market
share
while
Mango
corporation
will have Capitalize word
Corporation
30
% Correct article usage
a 30
market
share
. The remaining 20% would be controlled by the other jeans
manufacturers.Submitted by yoqubjonovjamshidbek23 on
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