The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking if they travelled abroad and why they travelled for the period 1994-98. The second chart shows their destinations over the same period. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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These charts provide us with
a poll information
about Remove the article
poll information
a piece of poll information
consideration
of 100000 Britain citizens who asked about Add an article
the consideration
they
travel destinations and Correct pronoun usage
their
whom
intentions of Correct pronoun usage
their
this
travel over a four year
period between 1994-1998.over Add a hyphen
four-year
all
what Correct pronoun usage
apply
inferred
from the first chart is that there Add a missing verb
is inferred
were
an incremental trend in Change the verb form
was
number
of people that had burning desire for travelling with verity of aims that travel with recreational goals was most prevalent .beside Change the article
a number
the number
this
the western Europe is most adored destination for this
questioned people and this
sector have seen a dramatic sour in number of visitors in given period of time.
If we look more closely to
Change preposition
at
figures
, we will figure out that the holiday is Correct article usage
the figures
most
popular reason for travelling among the Britain residents its figure started at 15243 in 1994 and after a temporary Correct article usage
the most
falling
in 1995 with 14894 have witnessed a substantial Replace the word
fall
fly
until 1998 with 20700.Correct your spelling
fall
in addition
, western Europe was most
privileged area for Add an article
a most
the most
England
population with 19371 in 1994 and in accordance with Change noun form
England's
this
data about holiday
after a Fix the agreement mistake
holidays
falling
in 1995 with 18954 have faced strikingly soar to 24516 in 1998.Replace the word
fall
by
respect to business, Change preposition
With
this
host reason for travelling commenced at 3155 in 1994 and slightly growth
to 3958 in 1998.
By a glance at visits to friends and relatives, data illustrate that Replace the word
grew
this
aim stand
in Change the verb form
stands
third
step in the term of passengers intention with 2689 in 1994 and have fronted with a moderate upward trend and Change the article
the third
raising
to 3181 in 1998.on top of Correct your spelling
rising
this
north America have
achieved the third Correct subject-verb agreement
has
popular
destination with 919 in 1994 and virtually doubled in 1998 with 1823.Correct quantifier usage
most popular
by
contrast
other Add a comma
contrast,
reason
for travelling have grasped with a fluctuation between 982 and 990in Fix the agreement mistake
reasons
given
period Correct article usage
a given
time
and did not possess a vivid trend. Change preposition
of time
However
, the booming of other regions have
had an incremental tendency so that it started at 981 in 1994 and Change the verb form
has
have
reached 1489 in 1998.if we investigate the total statistics we can deduce that Unnecessary verb
apply
individuals
Change noun form
individuals'
individual's
aspire
Wrong verb form
aspiring
for travelling
Change preposition
to travel
had
been rocketing so that it Wrong verb form
have
begun
at 22072 in 1994 and touched Add the auxiliary verb
began
has begun
the
28821 in 1998.Correct article usage
apply
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