The most important aim of science should be to improve people's life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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with adverted and intricate
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been revolutionized. Several of these alters ameliorate the human thornier suffering and some of which put a tremendous strain and burden on our shoulders.
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my way of thinking, any
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from
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life qualities improvement.
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with inexhaustible amenities that can alleviate
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of the most evident instant
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in the prehistory era to the AI in
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not possess the ability to dominate and
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any resource of
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world and utilize them for
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intentions
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attainment.
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life.
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, a growing number of individuals hold
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that if we
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take the breakthroughs that have been merged by
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echolocation from
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for authority.
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that
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in the harsh contrasting of human well-being. All aforementioned
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drives
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me to a concrete
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that, despite the fact that
science
invariably
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been in
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kind
serve
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life situation , it must have undertaken moral supremacy and
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the field
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malevolent
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person.
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